Raicheous-Muffin's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Double]

Aweome

Cool animation which hit's home very powerfully at the end.
I don't think there is anything else that I can say. A retelling of a poem, that could only be told through balls with clocks for faces.
Awesome.

[RUSH.]

Pretty awesome

Great job animating this, and I loved the style.
However some music could have really helped ad atmosphere, since without it the whole thing felt like it was missing something. Perhaps even a greater volume of background sounds would have helped.
However what I take issue with was the script. It didn't make any sense. Why that guy would run into the road, then stop when the light turned green. It didn't explain what his rush was. Also the ending fit the title very well, since it did indeed feel "rushed". It also didn't seem very funny.

Keep that animation style but tighten up your scripting. Your final product could really benefit from it.

[Hey Jim 2]

Meh

That was kinda funny, but I wasn't too blown away by the animation, and that last part where he's just standing there with a cigarette didn't really make much sense to me. It certainly didn't make me laugh. Good job with the voices, both clear and funny. Good thing that Tomamoto got that new recording equipment; it seems to be doing well for you.

Not much eles to say. Pretty decent gag, held down by some lame jokes.

ImpendingRiot responds:

Yeah, it was just for fun, I wasn't looking to change the world

[Paul Voltaire!]

Awesome!

Awesome animation wise, visually and a pretty good job on the voices. It was also funny, right up until that final joke. That kinda ruined it for me.

[This One's for the Kids]

Funny as shit!

Crazy animation and some funny lyrics. Not too keen on the song though, but that dosn't effect my high opinion of the video.

[Corn and Broccoli (Ep 1)]

Yet another odd couple show.

Loving the broccoli character a lot! Exceptional crazy! Good start in terms of sound, visuals and animation. Could develop quickly.

[Mallory]

Most awesomeness!

A nice, relaxing piece. I especially enjoyed the backgrounds, which added a sort of hand painted feel, and the music was also a very nice fit. It was both peaceful and sad in nice amounts, with a little bit of hope at the end.
However I would like to comment on your animation for the birds. The movements were not very fluent, and the part when the birds were in the park (I'm guessing that it was what that bird was hoping for it's egg right?), used a lot of still images, which I felt took momentum away from the finished product. When I comment on the movement, I'm not referring to the birds head movement, since that's how their heads move.

In short, a most awesome animation which fell short in terms of character movement.
On a side note, not effecting my review, what was up with that blob that lived in the tree?

Lancorz responds:

Thanks, I realise that the bird animations are a little less detailed than they could be however I was only given around 2 months which were soley dedicated to story boarding and design. If I had more time I would have experimented with movement and researching more time on animals etc.
Also the blob was just to add variety to the creature content and to add a little cute-ness to it.

[Office Things - Dindin]

Awesome

A simple yet entertaining short.

[Scaredy Cat]

Short and sweet

Awesome in terms of animation, character design and voice acting. Most awesome!